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                   We see the  greatness
                     of   faces   belittled
                     in       little     boxes 
                   with               windows;
                               still
               shattered             stairs.
                                by      
        
                Yielded                tree
                             from a
             yellow                    
                            bodies       wax  
       
             a                              
                         pall for its      garden    
                       
            as                         
                   they           from     their 
                             fall
        
              castles                
                            in the
                                         air.
      

                And  
                       the ground breaks,
         when 
                      we become        
                                              elephants
           that 
                      remember  
                                       themselves
            
             through      
                                    dirty glasses;
          
      awaiting 
                          t h e 
                                      
                                       p a l e    m  a 
                                                           r  e.
A found poem.
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Charmed-Ravenclaw Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is a cool piece.
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archelyxs Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013
This is delightful. :coffeecup:
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Pr0metheusUnb0und Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013
your cup of coffee? :D
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archelyxs Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013
Umm... yeah. Did you think I was talking to you? Awkward. :D
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Pr0metheusUnb0und Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013
Change the topic, quickly!
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archelyxs Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2013
Coffee? :coffeecup:
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Pr0metheusUnb0und Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013
I'm more of a bitter black tea person. :)
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Pauper-Circumstance Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013
I like the design of your poem! It is very interesting! :D I may do something like that.....
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Pr0metheusUnb0und Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013
good luck! :), and thank you.
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