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I painted you today.
Rolled up the paper,
and carried you in hand.

Gave you to a girl,
with your eyes,
and chestnuts in her hair,
like yours.

Made her smile,
seeing butterflies in a field,
but she gave you back,
when she saw
they are going in the sunset.

I put you on
my dreaming wall,
to be my last glimpse,
of my world
before I remember
you're only a painting.
A day of concetrated creative slumber in amidst child laughter.
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ChildoftheBeat Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012
You're welcome :)
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ChildoftheBeat Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012
Lyrical, natural, intimate - beautiful :)
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Pr0metheusUnb0und Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012
Thank you kindly sir.
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Sigma-Echo-Seven Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2012  Student Writer
"but she gave you back,"

Nice volta, very well done.
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Pr0metheusUnb0und Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2012
Thank you, though I am afraid that winter will overwhelm me... I need to put my thoughts on paper before I feel the cold. :)
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Sigma-Echo-Seven Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2012  Student Writer
It's alright, we've got time. :)
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my-soul-is-mine Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012
Very nice.
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Pr0metheusUnb0und Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012
Why thank you :).
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OP1atedDreems Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012  Student Writer
Simply divine.
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Pr0metheusUnb0und Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012
Thank you for encouraging me.
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OP1atedDreems Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2012  Student Writer
no problem.
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QueenOfQuills Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2012  Student Writer
I love the concept of a 'deaming wall' :aww:
Pretty poem with some lovely imagery, well done!
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Pr0metheusUnb0und Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2012
Thank you kindly.
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Frenchrolls Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Delightful
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Pr0metheusUnb0und Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2012
Why thank you kind person! :)
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Frenchrolls Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Very welcome
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starell Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2012
Love, love, love! So beautiful! I am enamoured by the way you write!
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Pr0metheusUnb0und Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2012
Why thank you. I'll put your comment on my wall as well ;).
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starell Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2012
Of course! And I would be honored!
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