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I painted you today.
Rolled up the paper,
and carried you in hand.

Gave you to a girl,
with your eyes,
and chestnuts in her hair,
like yours.

Made her smile,
seeing butterflies in a field,
but she gave you back,
when she saw
they are going in the sunset.

I put you on
my dreaming wall,
to be my last glimpse,
of my world
before I remember
you're only a painting.
A day of concetrated creative slumber in amidst child laughter.
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:iconchildofthebeat:
Lyrical, natural, intimate - beautiful :)
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:iconpr0metheusunb0und:
Thank you kindly sir.
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Sigma-Echo-Seven Oct 21, 2012  Student Writer
"but she gave you back,"

Nice volta, very well done.
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:iconpr0metheusunb0und:
Thank you, though I am afraid that winter will overwhelm me... I need to put my thoughts on paper before I feel the cold. :)
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Sigma-Echo-Seven Oct 21, 2012  Student Writer
It's alright, we've got time. :)
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OP1atedDreems Sep 21, 2012  Student Writer
Simply divine.
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:iconpr0metheusunb0und:
Thank you for encouraging me.
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