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In a snowball
out of time;
wandering the roads
of her shawl
and her hair,
paved with
wild cocoa and thyme,
I am searching
for a rescue,
not hers,
but mine.
Like the snowflake
looking for home
after its silent ball
in her stare.
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:iconroadkillkitten:
I really like the obscurity of this piece, its dichotomy, makes it moving. Very well done! I think we're all looking for a place called "home" in someone else's eyes.
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:iconpr0metheusunb0und:
It's the creator's fault! He made us wanting, maan!
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:iconroadkillkitten:
Ha haa... Well, I'm not sure who's "fault" it is, I think we just need someone to see us for who we really are, and love us anyway.
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:iconmerlfoxfell:
I really like the imagery here :) The last line does seem to bring it to a rather abrupt end considering the beautiful flow you've created with the description before, in my opinion. But the title fascinated me and I love the seemingly nosensical
'Wandering the roads
of her shawl
and her hair;
paved with
wild cocoa and thyme'
which actually creates a clear feeling without needing to be perfectly realistic. YAY!
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:iconpr0metheusunb0und:
YAY! Thank you kindly dear sir/madam. :)
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